Are your characters up to scratch?

Without a wonderful cast your plot simply doesn’t exist. The treasure will remain buried and the castle will forever stand. So how do we as writers successfully create believable, memorable and effective characters.


Is your character likeable?

All characters should have negative traits, but if your reader can’t empathise or resonate with your protagonist they’re not going to like them. Your character may have to slaughter many people to save the girl, but how does he feel about what he’s doing? Your character might be a teenage girl – we know teenagers often display attitude, but if she’s a bitch to everyone is the reader going to like her? If your reader doesn’t like your character they can’t develop empathy for them. Then your reader won’t care if they complete mission or get the girl, and may very well stop reading.

Is your character motivated?

I once heard a writer say they had gotten to a certain point in the story and couldn’t go any further. I asked why. They said, ‘Because I’m not exactly sure why the antagonist is hunting the protagonist.’ Alarm bells rang, loudly. Your character’s motivations should be defined even before you start writing. Their motivation can be external or internal. Do they want to stop aliens blowing up cities? Or do they want to find peace over their father’s murder? Or both? If your character has no motivation what are they even doing in your story?

Does your character have history?

I have a strong connection to the plant star jasmine because I grew up with a vine outside my back door. The fragrance will always remind me of my childhood home. Everyone has a story like that don’t they? So should your character. You don’t have to write their biography, but developing some key points in their history will help you understand what your character likes, what they want, what they don’t want, and what may subconsciously motivate them.


The Character Diamond

Character DiamondPeople are multi-faceted, and so too should our characters be. If the protagonist only has wonderful qualities how can the reader watch them grow through their decisions and actions? Creating a diamond for each of your characters will not only reinforce to yourself who they are, but this will come through in your writing as your compose their dialogue, interactions with other characters and how they react to situations.

STRENGTHS – their strongest qualities and outwardly visible

WEAKNESS – these are not necessarily bad, E.G. (being an emotional person can affect logic)

DESIRES & DEMONS – what lies beneath the surface that isn’t apparent. These can affect motivations and how your character relates to others

ATTITUDES – these will help to pull your character through the tough times, and perhaps endear people to them

Below is an example of the character diamond I have created for my character, Zac Loughlin from Through the AusHole.

Character diamond example


Character Archetypes

All characters falls into an archetype. It’s helpful to know which archetype your character belongs to for a few reasons.

  • Do you have characters that are too similar? Can you drop a character or flesh them out more?
  • Is there an archetype missing from your story who could assist/sabotage your hero’s quest?
  • Character definition: Is your protagonist not who you thought they were?

There are many lists out there, but I think the one below is comprehensive without being over the top.

Analyst: Can explain anything rationally. Ex: Mr. Spock

Anti-hero: The hero who didn’t ask to get involved but does. Ex: Sarah Connor, Wolverine

Benefactor: Has a whole lot of something he wants to share. Ex: Miss Havisham

Bully: Has no tolerance for weakness, especially in himself. Ex: Scut Farkus (Christmas Story)

Bureaucrat: Follows the rules no matter what. Hermione Granger

Caretaker: Cares for others. Ex: Digory Kirke

Catalyst: Makes things happen.

Child: Could be a literal child or just living like one. Ex: Wally McDoogle, Peter Pan

Coward: Afraid of everything, controlled by fear. Ex: Adrian Monk, Cowardly Lion, Alexandra Rover

Curmudgeon: Irritable and cynical and proud of it. Ex: Ebenezer Scrooge

Dreamer: Longs to be something he isn’t. Ex: Annie, William Thatcher (A Knight’s Tale)

Elder/Mentor/Teacher/Parent: Been around long enough to know some vital information. Ex: Ben Kenobi, Mufassa

Explorer/Wanderer: Wants to see the world—could be running from something.

Extraordinary man: The guy who can do anything. Ex: Indiana Jones, James Bond

Gossip: Must be the first to know everything and the one to pass it on. Ex: Rachel Lynde

Guardian: Protects the weak.

Hedonist/Thrill-seeker: Lives for today in case tomorrow never comes.

Herald/Messenger: The bringer of news, good, bad, or necessary.

Hermit/Loner: Just wants to be left alone. Ex: Phil Hercules, Martin Riggs (Lethal Weapon)

Hunter/Predator: Can catch or kill anything. Ex: Terminator

Innocent: An inexperienced individual exposed to the evils in the world. Ex: Dorothy Gale

Introvert: Lives inside his shell to prevent anyone from seeing the real him. Ex: Gabriella Montez (High School Musical)

Investigator: Thrives on puzzles and riddles. Ex: Nancy Drew, Sherlock Holmes

Judge/Mediator: The arbitrator or peacemaker in a conflict.

Leader: Always knows the best thing to do—and people follow. Ex: William Wallace

Magician/Wizard/Superpowers: Has special powers or abilities. Ex: Superman, Harry Potter

Manipulator: Plays with people and situations to get what he wants. Ex: Scarlett O’Hara

Martyr: Willing to suffer or die for others or a cause.

Masochist: Finds pleasure in torturing himself, denying himself—may take on too much.

Masquerader: Pretends to be something he is not.

Monster: A depraved beast. Ex: Gollum, Grendel (Beowulf)

Ordinary Man: Your average Joe, just like you or me or the guy across the street. Ex: Dr. Richard Kimball, Frodo Baggins.

Penitent: Lives to atone for his sin.

Perfectionist: Every action and word must be flawless.

Pleaser/Show-off: Craves approval from anyone and may do anything to get it.

Poet: Life is art, be that through story or song or art or sculpture.

Rebel/Revolutionary: Stands opposed to the status quo and fights for his cause.

Rogue: Looks out for himself and no one else. Ex: Han Solo

Saboteur/Betrayer: For whatever reason, he will make sure something fails. Ex: Edmund Pevensie

Samaritan: Does good deeds wherever he goes.

Scholar: Wants to learn.

Sensualist: Addicted to feeling good about himself.

Slave: Does not belong to himself. Ex: Dobby the house elf

Survivor: Pulls through no matter what happens, doesn’t give up.

Sycophant: Self-seeking, flatterer, who works to please those in power. Ex: Smee (Peter Pan)

Temptress: Uses power (intellect, magic, beauty) to make others weak. Ex: Megara (Hercules)

Thief: Takes what he wants or needs. Ex: Philippe Gaston (LadyHawke), Jean Valjean

Trickster/Jester: Always looking for the humor in a situation. Ex: Fred and George Weasley

Tyrant: Must be in control at all times. Ex: Captain Hook

Victim: Was hurt by someone or lives in fear that someone will hurt him. Ex: Claireece “Precious” Jones

Villain: Seeks to destroy/trap the hero. Ex: Evil Queen in Snow White, Lex Luthor

Waif: Appears innocent and weak and often relies on the pity of others. Ex: The Kid (Dick Tracy)


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